THE RAM’S HEAD REVIEW

December 16, 2006 
 

We did meet here on that dark and stormy night of December 14th.  Margaret and Ellie both said the driving was bad on their way to my place.  And the winds later that night were ferocious. 

Margaret brought some calendars from Scotland and New Zealand that she was giving away.  Apparently she receives a number each year from friends in foreign lands.  So if you want to know what holidays are scheduled in other countries each year, try asking Margaret. 

Nathaniel brought several items to show us.  The first was a flint used for starting fires before the advent of matches.  It was used to strike a spark that would land on a char cloth, which would ignite.  He also had a tobacco box with a magnifying glass which was used for lighting tobacco in a pipe.  Another item was an 1899 atlas, showing the world as it was known at that point in history.  And the last item was a bottle of #6 Phenol Disinfectant that he had found at the old family farm in Saskatchewan.  Printed on the bottle were all the many uses for it, as well as instruction to imbibe a great deal of alcohol if the Phenol was accidentally swallowed.  The choice was kill or cure, I guess. 

Bob brought a book by Jeff Shaara and read a piece from it where the author explains how he uses dialogue in his writing.  And then I read a piece from a book of writing exercises that said dialogue is “seen” on the page, read with the eye, rather than perceived as sound.  But Nathaniel said he reads “aloud” inside his mind, so he didn’t believe that was true.   

Margaret read another Peabody tale, this one “The Cold Facts”.  She showed us a journalist, Harvey, on the trail of a story in England.  He meets with Rev. Arthur Peabody, an old and skeletal looking man, who admits to having killed somebody many years before.  He tells Harvey the body is burried underneath the floorboards of the room they are in.  Harvey goes back the next day to dig up the skeleton, but the house had disappeared.  Or maybe it hadn’t existed in the first place?  Spooky. 

As it was still dark and stormy out, Ellie read to us the beginning of another fantasy tale with a very eerie beginning.  Perrit senses a terrible “wrongness” of nature, and suspects something is terribly amiss.  And we learn that Caldor, The Mage, is missing. 

Nathaniel read to us a later chapter in his book, after Alexander has seduced Elise, the wife of his friend, Jacques.  And now he wonders if his friend knows.  The Metis community, with horses and carts, is out on the prairie on a buffalo hunt.  The hunt is done cooperatively, with everyone having a role to play in tracking, killing, butchering, and preserving hides and meat to see them through the winter.  The herd is seen on the horizon.  The Metis stampede the herd and then ride through it, shooting and killing as many buffalo as they can.  Alexander and his horse are gored by a bull and go down.  Jacques shoots the injured horse and saves Alexander, but then says he will kill him another time.  --  This scene was written in vivid detail, with lots of action and tension happening.  We could certainly see the stampede and the dust and the blood.  Bryon was sitting on the stairs listening, and said to tell Nathaniel he really enjoyed that chapter. 

Susan said she is definitely re-writing “Select Availability” in first person, with no prologue, as she feels it is a more intimate story that way.  The rest of us all marvel at her tenacity when it comes to re-writes.  Amazing. 

At this point, I wish everyone a Very Merry Christmas.   

Our next Meeting (Party?) will be here at my place on Thursday, December 28th at 7:00 p.m.  Bob is bringing his Sticky Date Pudding, and I’ll put out some snacks and some wine and cheese.  And there’s no time limit on the fun.  Hope to see everybody then. 

Happy Holidays to one and all. 

Lisa